From: jeffrey E. <jeevacation@gmail.com>
Sent: Friday, December 1, 2017 1:03 PM
To: ehud barak

one comma per sentence is already enough. two =hree four. we call run on sentences. .

Still, even I had to accept, it was no fun to fly on. =A0 this is not english. . Still , I ha= to admit that flying on it was no
fun. . se=tences cannot be ended in fly on

It was the same model of 707 for which I, with a couple of other young soldiers and enginee=s, had come up with what we dubbed the "submarine door" system=outside the cockpit — to protect El Al pilots from future attacks after one of =ts planes had been hijacked to Algiers in the summer of 1968.

too long for one sentence

Yet these three dedicated men — Gili, who was by training a lawyer; Shl=mo, an academic; and Danny, a former Mossad chief — had just been through =ozens of hours of intricately detailed talks with each of Arafat's top negot=ators at Camp David, not to mention the dozens of other meetings before we had even got there.

too long and we had even got there. not english

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