<table><tr><th>From:</th><th>jeffrey E. &lt;jeevacation@gmail.com&gt;</th></tr><tr><td>Sent:</td><td>Monday, December 4, 2017 8:50 PM</td></tr><tr><td>To:</td><td>Astrid Gil-Casares</td></tr><tr><td>Subject:</td><td>Re: Fist draft!</td></tr></table>

I m aware of the concept. but while amusing .=C2 doesnt move the story along. the tempo must drive =ou to the next scene. however keep in mind =C2 this is not what i do. ask about income inequality =and i will expalin that on world wide basis including of=course india and china income inequlaity has shrunk by a large margi=.

On Mon, Dec 4, 2017 at 3:45 PM, Astrid Gil=Casares
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No! That is my=mother. She is about to get an operation on her leg. She is definitely not=with lingerie, just with the hospital gown. That scene is about being caug=t by the doctor with wine, pistachos (both mother and daughter drinking) a=d Gaelle a white mask on while on hospital (thinking nurses shifts where f=nished, which they were btw!). The doctor stays to take the mother =99s pressure etc while she doesn't know what to do with the glass =ine and Gaelle doesn't know how to talk seriously with her mask I.=

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On 4 Dec 2017, at 21=29, jeffrey E. <jeevacation@gmail.com <mailto:jeevacation@gmail.com» wrote:

in the hospital bed

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*   Date: Mon, Dec 4, 2017
*   Time: 3:24 PM
*   Sender: =strid Gil-Casares

What=would you change about Felipe? It has to be a man that attracts women. Mig=el just a friend, not really important for the plot, could change him easi=y. Juan can't change much about him (he is real but can't =alk much about him since my ex).

What about Olivia?
Ga=lle?

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On 4 De= 2017, at 20:53, jeffrey E. <jeevacation@gmail.com <mailtoieevacation@gmail.com»

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i like your fetish with locksm=th line. but much of it is too common. children in=upermarket for first time with fromerly rich mom. migule felpe= . . also i wasnt sure about 70 year old in black linger=e in bed? :)

# NOFLICT charactere development. =AO littel , this is a story not a film

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*   On Monday, December 4, 2017 at 2:32 PM, Astrid Gil-Casares wrote an email.

I s=ill have to write about her job (she is a children book writer and will be=in between scenes already written), 3 more comic scenes I have already in =y mind and the end.

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