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Sent: Tuesday, May 19, 2015 5:17 PM
To: jeffrey E.
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Can you help me ?

Il martedì 19 maggio 2015, jeffr=y E. <jeevacation@gmail.com <mailto:jeevacation@gmail.com>>

Need a lot of edits =A0

On Tuesday, May 19, 2015, ███████████ <███████████████████> wrote:

Is it ok for this one ? still wor=ing on the second one..


On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 6:00 PM, ███████████ <██████████████████> wrote:

this is the first essay on why I w=nt to move in Paris and attend AUP (300 words)

What attracts you the most about coming =o The American University of Paris and how do you believe the experience of living in Paris will change you?

My mother is from Paris and I have been to Paris on many occasions. I feel strongly connected to this European capital from many perspectives, includi=g family and education.

Among my most recent visits to Paris, there are a few fashion shows that I attend=d: in October 2013 I attended Chanel's spring and summer ready-to-wear=show and in January 2014 the Chanel and Valentino haute couture show; then in November =014 I attended the Parisian Debutantes Ball (representing Chanel), where I met people from across the world. Every time I spend time in Paris I was able t= feel how vibrant and beautiful this city is and how much it has to offer because=of the artistic and historical richness of Paris. I have benefitted from also living in Rome, which is where I initially developed an appreciation for ar=s and culture, museums, the opera and discovering Italy's wealth of cultu=al offerings very soon, realizing that I wanted to pursue my passion for art history at AUP.

Attending The American University of Paris would also represent the natural evolution=of my education, both received at home and in school: my father is Italian but=my mother is French and thanks to her I attended the French Lycee in Rome= earning a French Baccalaureat with a major in Economic and Social Sciences. I =m fluent in Italian and French, but also in English because I studied it in school a=d mastered it during my frequent trips to the United States, where my two stepbrothers live. I have been exposed and appreciate the American culture =ecause of my internships

with Bulgari's US office, in Los Angeles and the Ferragamo US PR department in New York City. My family origin and the education I received seem to lead me to an American University in Paris where I will be able to put my skills into practice and pursue my academic objectiv=s and goals.

Studying art history at the American University of Paris would be a great opportunit= to further discover the French culture. I believe that the education I will acquire by completing an AUP undergraduat= program, coupled with additional internship experience, will equip me with all neces=ary skills to achieve my future career goal to work in the art or fashion indus=ry.

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