Subject: RE: GM - Letter re Warden

From: "[redacted]" (USANYS) <[redacted]>

To: "[redacted]" <[redacted]>, "[redacted]" <[redacted]>, "[redacted]" <[redacted]> (3 recipients; names and emails redacted)

Subject: RE: GM - Letter re Warden

Date: Tue, 01 Dec 2020 20:15:35 +0000

Attachments: 2020-12-01_GM_letter_regarding_defense_request_re_MDC_warden_v1.docx

I'm back at my desk. I can send this along to the chiefs. I just added quotes around her statement in the attached. If you have something else in mind, let me know!

- Subject: "GM - Letter re Warden" (threaded; several "Re:"/"RE:" replies)
- Date: December 1, 2020

Messages (chronological):
- 12:45 PM — From: [redacted] → To: [redacted]  
  (no body shown in visible portion)

- 12:48 PM — From: [redacted] → [redacted]  
  Excerpt: "Hi [redacted], Thanks so much for drafting — I think my only suggestion would be to tweak the language a little bit to make it more obvious that the language from Bobbi is a direct quote from them/that they wrote it (and that we aren’t just characterizing their view). Thanks!"

- 1:20 PM — From: [redacted] (USANYS) → [redacted]  
  Excerpt: "If you guys want to make any edits you like and then send to the chiefs, that’s fine with me. I’m not sure when I’ll be done here"

- 1:27 PM — From: [redacted] → [redacted] (USANYS); Cc: [redacted]  
  Excerpt: "Sure, no problem. [redacted], any comments? Sent from my iPhone"

- 1:38 PM — From: [redacted] → [redacted]; [redacted] (USANYS)  
  Excerpt: "Agree with your proposal, [redacted]. Otherwise nothing from me. Thanks very much."

Key points / actions:
- Recipients generally approve sending the draft to the chiefs once edits are made.
- A specific suggestion: clearly mark language from "Bobbi" as a direct quote/from them (avoid implying it’s the authors’ characterization).
- Thread participants are redacted; multiple USANYS-addressed senders included.

Hi — I didn't have as much time to work on this as I had hoped before I have to leave the office, but wanted to get the draft circulating. Sorry about that. Please feel free to edit as much as you like. Saved in the correspondence folder, and attached.

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Thanks,

Assistant United States Attorney
United States Attorney's Office
Southern District of New York
One St. Andrew's Plaza
New York, New York 10007
Tel:

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